Score: 10

"Amazing..."

submission: Star Wars Gangsta Rap: SE

date: June 17, 2004

I remember the first time you submitted this. It's even more funny now, I think. Anyway... you know how good this movie is, so I don't have to extol how you did just about everything perfectly.

I have one complaint, and its about your author's comments. People are allowed to view and vote whatever they want on anything they want. Do you realize how fucked the portal would be if every kid that said "Don't vote on this if you don't like stick movies" was listened too. Part of being successful in the portal involves being universally appealing to everyone. Besides... I don't think being ranked 4.38 is anything to be ashamed of.

Score: 2

"Huge Filesize..."

submission: Bob's Winter

date: June 17, 2004

You need to work on Audio Compression. That file could have been under 2 megs I bet. To make him dying on the shovel, you could have split him onto two layers, so the shovel actually goes through him and not behind him. And honestly, that explosion was about 10 seconds too long.

Also... whoever gave you that preloader, I definitly think he ripped it from newgrounds. He just deleted the picture, and changed the play button. Someone who knows how to code a percent preloader would probably know how to use the center object command to keep his button aligned with the loading bar. Also, he wouldn't change from the bar identical to Toms, to an ugly ass play button. So tell your friend who gave you that preloader that he is a douche bag.

Score: 6

"Excellent..."

submission: Fuel (Demo)

date: June 9, 2004

Here is one glitch I found. Winning money is really really easy if you do a longer race. If you change the distance to even 1000, you get going so fast that you slaughter the time every time. So maybe come up with some way to fix that. Other than that, I can't wait to see the final product.